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Last Breath

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I tried to move and groaned. Everything hurt. I tried to breathe, pulling in ragged breaths, each hurting my throat and lungs. I felt movement close beside me and I opened my eyes. I turned my head slightly to the right and my gaze found his.

He was breathing rather harshly too. He dragged his way towards me and he ignored me when I tried to warn him. With a last grunt, he slid his body next to mine. My fingers started to search before I realized what they were doing. They found his searching fingers and we held on to each other that way. With his free hand, he tapped his chest once, then traced a circle over his heart twice, and finally pointed at me.

My heart squeezed painfully and I smiled through the tears that blinded my eyes. I knew what that meant. I answered him back.

I (tapping my chest once) love (tracing a circle twice over my heart) you (pointing at him) too (putting my hand on my right shoulder). His answering smile was enough to ebb all the pain away.

I closed my eyes, a smile still lingering on my face, took a last deep breath, and felt no more.        
This is my first... eh.. short story, that I submit, so... ^^)


I was listening to a song and got the inspiration from there.

"Love of mine some day you will die
But I'll be close behind
I'll follow you into the dark"

I'll follow you into the dark - Death Cab for Cutie
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Solcarn's avatar
que depresiva paulina. XD hahaha aaaaw que leeenda.